0/25 I can see your mock-ups, but not your own original production. It is a shame, because you have done so much excellent work on the pieces you have included. It is really important that you get used to sticking to deadlines. It may be that you simply haven't hit the UPDATE button. If that is the case, do it soon and email me to let me know.
14/25 You have shown awareness of layout and design, but for a piece like this you need to copy a lot more meticulously. Look really carefully at the way that magazines layout their pages. Think carefully about the amount of text, the way they use spaces around the image and the different fonts choices they use. The more meticulously you look at these elements and the closer you are to copying existing media the higher your score will be. Your front cover photo is sound, but take real care with the editing. The softness of the brush you used needs to be reduced so that the edge is more definite.
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ReplyDeleteI can see your mock-ups, but not your own original production. It is a shame, because you have done so much excellent work on the pieces you have included. It is really important that you get used to sticking to deadlines. It may be that you simply haven't hit the UPDATE button. If that is the case, do it soon and email me to let me know.
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ReplyDeleteYou have shown awareness of layout and design, but for a piece like this you need to copy a lot more meticulously. Look really carefully at the way that magazines layout their pages. Think carefully about the amount of text, the way they use spaces around the image and the different fonts choices they use. The more meticulously you look at these elements and the closer you are to copying existing media the higher your score will be. Your front cover photo is sound, but take real care with the editing. The softness of the brush you used needs to be reduced so that the edge is more definite.